The first thing that jumps out is the Peril Canyon logo, you need to refine it. Compare with the style of your Download button.
I'd like to see the video use more screen space for the actual gameplay, perhaps move the iPhone frame out in the HTML background. The YouTube interface that comes up makes the spacing to the Download button look a bit naff too.
The lighting on the plane in the video is weird. In a canyon I would expect everything to be lit from the top by the sun with plenty of ambient light. It actually appears to be lit from behind and is almost black when facing up.
The copy mentions upgrades and unlocking things, can you use some images from the game to tease us with those?
The game actually looks kind of fun, congratulations!
The plane does have very little ambient lighting, it's pretty much all specular. The idea was that this would help make it look more "steath fighter-like", but thanks for the feedback that it's not accomplishing that particularly well.
I'll have to think about what to do with the video. Video editing is kinda a big time sink, but I definitely like the idea of putting the iPhone frame around it to make the screen bigger.
I'd like to see the video use more screen space for the actual gameplay, perhaps move the iPhone frame out in the HTML background. The YouTube interface that comes up makes the spacing to the Download button look a bit naff too.
The lighting on the plane in the video is weird. In a canyon I would expect everything to be lit from the top by the sun with plenty of ambient light. It actually appears to be lit from behind and is almost black when facing up.
The copy mentions upgrades and unlocking things, can you use some images from the game to tease us with those?
The game actually looks kind of fun, congratulations!